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4.2.25 22:34

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pribeh do aj

I will never forget the day, how we found the cat.
One fall evening we came home from shopping. We got out of the car and suddenly heard some noises and we sawl little cat. The cat was hungry and very thin and looked scared.We took her home and she ate. My sister started calling her Sněženka. Sněženka slept over at our place.The next day no one called.We thought about what to do with her. In the end We kept the cat, because we didnt have any pets. The cat still lives with us today and will be 5 this year. My sister started calling her Sněženka.
Ahoj, mam mit na hodinu aj kratky pribeh. Je tento pribeh v pohode? Mam tam nejake chyby treba v gramatice, pokud ano jake?

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5.2.25 17:41

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I'll never forget the day we found the cat.

We came back from shopping one autumn evening. We got out of the car and suddenly we heard some noises and saw a little cat. The cat was hungry and very thin and looked scared. We took her home and she ate. My sister started calling her Snow White.
Snow White spent the night with us. The next day, no one called. We were wondering what to do with her. We ended up keeping the cat because we didn't have any pets. The cat still lives with us today and she will be five years old this year. My sister started calling her Snow White.

Mimochodem, tu poslední vetu tam máš dvakrát. Kocka byla malá, nebo kotě? Pokud mala vzrůstem, tak spis small, pokud kote, tak spis little. Pak uplne nedava smysl, proc druhy den nikdo nevolal…to je spis o slohu…tech slohovych chyb by tam bylo vic. Treba vzali jsme ji domu a pak jedla. To je hodne kostrbaté…jestli si chtela rict, ze ste ji nakrmili, spis bych pouzila „to feed“, tedy we fed her

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