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Anonymní

13.2.25 16:15

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Last summer, I went on holiday with my family to Spain. The weather was very good and sunny. We had a lot of fun, because we swam in the sea everyday. One day, while driving to a small town, we suddenly saw a car crash into a tree.The driver didn't stop, because he wasn't looking.

We stopped our car and I called for help. Then, some other people stopped too and they helped the driver. After a few minutes, an ambulance arrived and took the driver to the hospital. He was hurt, but not badly. We were scared. In the end we were cheerful, because he wasn't seriously hurt. After some time, he was fine.

After the accident, we decided to drive more carefully. It was a scary moment, but we learned that it is very important to drive safely and be careful on the road

Jsou v tomto pribehu dobre napsana cleny, gramatika a casy?

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Marketa606

13.2.25 16:26

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Nejsou na to dneska appky, aby to zkontrolovaly? Klidne bych to hodila i do google translatoru, at to hodi do cestiny, trochu si poladis preklad a nechas to hodit zase do aj. Par chyb vidim, ale nejsem profik. To slovo cheerful bych zvazila nahradit slovem relieved.

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Anonymní

13.2.25 16:29

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@Marketa606 vidite tam nejakou chybu v casech?

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13.2.25 16:41

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Nebo DeepL, za mě lepší online překladač než google.

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Anonymní

13.2.25 16:48

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@Ledová káva podle toho DeepL dava cely text smysl, ale nevim, zda nejsou chyby v časech

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13.2.25 17:22

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Nemá tam být: One day, while we were driving to a small town…?

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13.2.25 17:55

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Tady mi chatgpt poupravil celý text, můžeš se inspirovat:

Last summer, I went on holiday with my family to Spain. The weather was wonderful—warm and sunny every day. We had a fantastic time, especially because we swam in the sea daily, enjoying the refreshing water and the golden beaches.

One day, while driving to a small town, we suddenly witnessed a shocking accident—a car crashed straight into a tree. It happened in an instant, and it was clear that the driver hadn't been paying attention. He didn't even attempt to stop.

We immediately pulled over, and I quickly called for help. Soon, other people also stopped to assist. Some rushed to check on the driver, while others tried to direct traffic. Within minutes, an ambulance arrived, and the paramedics carefully took the driver to the hospital. Although he was injured, his condition wasn’t serious, which was a huge relief. At first, we were shaken by the incident, but in the end, we felt grateful that he was going to be okay.

After this experience, we became much more cautious on the road. It was a frightening moment, but it taught us a valuable lesson—road safety is crucial, and staying focused while driving can prevent terrible accidents.